Wednesday, February 15, 2006

A long wait....

     S stood there in front of girls hostel, waiting for Iris, every morning. S was never impunctual in any of his deeds nor was Iris.. But what was making Iris take unsually such a long time today.. making it a long wait for S. 10 mins passed and within this time S weaved all sorts of weird thoughts of her getting late. He re-thought was it his craze that made him forget it to be another weekend. But no, it wasn’t,it was just Tuesday.. Neither the day nor the time of 9:00 am in the morning was a culprit.. something somewhere was wrong…

     Another 15 mins passed with S never realizing the fact that he was already 20 mins late for the most awaited campus interview of his life. But then again as people say love is blind. But I disagree… wasn’t it true that he wished only to see wht was the demand of tht moment. All the more coz S was totally blindfolded by Iris’s love and same was the case with Iris. Finally after a long wait Iris appeared somewhere behind the security at the entrance of the girls hostel..

     It was the most awaited moment for S and it was totally visible in every expression that took shape on S’s face… Iris walked out of the gate and confronted S who was as ever with the same charming smile on his face even without a single drop of complain. But S found the full absence of that mesmerizing and charming smile, usually well – knit on Iris’s face. The long wait never even slightly had an impact on S.. but now the killing thing was the very presence of Iris’s blank face.. what, when and how went wrong and that too within few hrs of night time (where they weren’t 2gether)...

     Finally after a long pause as usual S took the initiative to wish her a sweet "good morning" and it didn’t take long for Iris to get a small curve of artificial smile on her face… Without uttering even a single word Iris started walking with S on her side, to cover the distance from her hostel to their dept… Both of them felt the distance never ending with the killing silence having engulfed both of them. Finally S took the initiative and asked "Whats the matter??"...Iris ended every chance of further questioning with a simple answer "S I m finally leaving..."

     S was totally blank to pose any other question…what was wrong on his part for her to have taken such a decision… And finally a retrace back made him understand many a things… And his only next question was "where????". The answer Iris gave drained him of all the pleasures in life that he had already dreamt of, for the next 7 births. She had not only decided to leave the place but also S… what was the reason never anyone knew except for S and Iris, which Iris finally shared on their last date at their favorite spot and that too that very night at 12:00 (what a time and location)…

     The only thing that remains today is the long distance separating S and Iris... and more to it Iris is getting married shortly.... S and Iris are still madly in love but the name for that love has changed... hope in next birth they get united without the insane reason that separated them out in this birth.....

33 Comments:

Blogger Samyak said...

and why they seperated??

Iris is as crazy as she always been...
I hate her :-s

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger kosha said...

whats the reason!!
if the reason is insane why is it a reason in first place...

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Samyak said...

and theres no conclusion this time !!
[:)]

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@siege.. she has been and will b always..

conclusion nahi hai coz tht doesn't suffice for this post.. its endless..

@kosha.. reason insane hai tabhi toh sirf un dono ko hi pata hai kisi teesre ko nahi!! :)))

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Mohan Kodali said...

what is the reason!!!

decided to leave the place 'coz she wanted to leave 'S'...?

Post the part-2 as fast as you can. :)

PS: Is there any special reson for calling him "S" and here Iris?

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Aurora said...

but without any reason why Iris did this with S

bechare S ko toh acha jhatka lag gaya

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger  Raja said...

I don't like that Iris still loves S [-(. Move on, Iris. S never really loved you

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Voice said...

*everyone is asking u the reason as if u know that.. as if u r Iris , r u?

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@chandu.. Post the part-2 as fast as you can.

don't have guts to post the same :)))

Is there any special reson for calling him "S" and here Iris?

yup spl reason behind tht also :)))

@megs.. but without any reason why Iris did this with S

reason toh tha lekin thoda weird sa whch was hard for both S and Iris to accept :)))

@mipple.. yeh achanak tumhey kya ho gaya vini

thought of penning down somethng and see wht i wrote even i don't believe myself :DDD

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@raja.. Move on, Iris. S never really loved you

I think Iris is the person who moved out so it has to b S who has loved and still loves her.. and Iris had to accept the fact of leaving S but ppl can't force her to kill her feelings for him :))))

@voice.. yahan ke characters r very much real lekin ab ye kaun hai main nahi keh sakti bas hain :)))

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger kosha said...

but if they r not ready to accept the reason...y r they separated...
i still dont get the gist of all this...i cant digest the fact tht they can separate for some insane resaon..then their love was not strong enuf...

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@kosha.. the reason is just a major contributor of their separation...

then their love was not strong enuf...

love was strong dear.. but life is sometimes harsh to overcome love... u may have different perspective of love and they have different.. somewhere else also i quoted the same lines once again putting it here..

"All love don't end in marriage"..

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger  Raja said...

@Vini:
u said that they still love each other. so I asked iris to move on B-)

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@raja.. the answer to tht remains one ...whch is there in the reply to kosha :)))

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Blogger Aurora said...

reason toh tha lekin thoda weird sa whch was hard for both S and Iris to accept :)))


but ending kuch jum nahi reha
both love each other and for just any reason they got seperated ?

Wednesday, 15 February, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

;i:kuch tho kichadi pak rahi hai... :P ;):-i:

Sab aapka asar hai logon pe Mipple ji. pyaar kuch cheez hi aisi hai, sabpe asar daalati hai !! hum bhi to aapke deewane hai..pyaar me!

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger Voice said...

@athena
real cast...hmmm :P agar nahi bataogi to people will start speculating ... is that what u want...i guess so. :P


@mipple
mera blog padh lo... waha nahi hai loveology ki baatein

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger kosha said...

i wont believe till u tell a reason...
there has to be a reason...otherwise all this doesnt make sense...

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger Saras said...

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Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The love for iris is still there in my heart and her place will be above all uptil fate :) and for the separation you can't blame iris alone S was also responsible

iris's S

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger Mohan Kodali said...

no anon comments X-(

puh-leaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Vini
letting the curiosity to rise and now if u dont tell the reasons behind everything happened(ing), we cant even sleep peacefully :P

now atleast tell the reason rather than the names..

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wahi toh..
anon comments not allowd here..
bass bahot hua..

saare pyaar me pade hai.. TLTE to couple's den ho gaya hai :XXXx

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger Voice said...

The love for iris is still there in my heart and her place will be above all uptil fate :) and for the separation you can't blame iris alone S was also responsible

iris's S


this is untolerable. Iris's S u can do whatever u want to do with Iris, but leave athena in peace... no more bugging ..

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger Alchemist said...

iris, 'S' !!

u like greek mythology or wat?

btw, iris is the goddess of rainbow.

Thursday, 16 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@mipple.. harr blog main toh nahi hai kahin kahin hi hai :PPP

@megs.. reason bataana utna hi mushkil hai jitna ye blog likhna tha :)))

@kosha.. i wont believe till u tell a reason...

i don't thnk u need to believe nythng coz nothngs gonna affect u or ur life.. yup mayb it may affect someone close to u :))

@chandu.. now atleast tell the reason rather than the names..

i said earlier also no guts :)))

@iris's S.. Iris also keeps the same view.. but alas thngs don't happen as they ought to be :))

@voice.. thnx for the concern u showed on tht anon. comment :))

@alch.. yup i luv greek mythology a lot.. thts very much depicted in my blogger name also :))

Athena -- The goddess of modesty :))

Friday, 17 February, 2006  
Blogger Samiran Ghosh said...

i will definitely take that ending

Sunday, 19 February, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

actaully they r good friends and i can say 'S' is still a friend but iris is lil busy....she pretends to be busy but is not.....

Sunday, 19 February, 2006  
Blogger Saras said...

Ye Anon kaun hai??
S still loves Iris but she is completely ignoring him coz she is afraid that she might fall in love with him again
:)
[i]he was already 20 mins late for the most awaited campus interview of his life[/i]
?? aisa kya??

Monday, 20 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@shailesh.. yup they can be but as of now not, they r just good frnds..seems definitely they will bcome best frnds :))))

@samiran.. hmm seems u too have faced the hard face of life...

@anon... 'S' is still a friend but iris is lil busy....she pretends to be busy but is not.....

may b she pretends many a thngs but never will S feel like tht nor would iris...

@saras.. coz she is afraid that she might fall in love with him again

ye bhi ek reason ho sakta hai never thought of it :PPPPP

hmm bechaare 'S' ka toh ek interview gaya paani main :DD

Monday, 20 February, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

may b she pretends many a thngs but never will S feel like tht nor would iris...

its not like that, they will be best friends ever... don't let it happen iris don't leave me. this is not correct. So plz comeback to normal iris

Yours 'S'

Monday, 20 February, 2006  
Blogger Athena said...

@anon.. this is not correct. So plz comeback to normal iris

whtever is happening is correct as per iris and S, so how come u have prob.. seems ur some other S ..

Tuesday, 21 February, 2006  
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